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Working Space by miimork Working Space by miimork
Watercolor with pencil shading on 24cm x 32cm paper

My original character Venilla <3<3<3
She is a time seller. She can sell time to people who want more time (like me *lol* I really want free time ksdjflksdjf ) and also buy time from people who have too much free time with nothing to do. Also time slip, stop the time, go to future, back to the past etc. is also on sale XD

I just notice that I drew the train too small...... *blush*


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As an intermediate watercolor / multimedia artist, I can appreciate how difficult this must have been. There is just so much detail! The colors have a soft, almost faded look which is perfect for the "time" theme, and the whole piece fades nicely into a border. Perspective and shading are very well done - I especially like the pearly clock faces.
It is always wonderful to find a deviation in which the concept and the actual piece are equally impressive; I love the idea of someone in their "working space" selling time as a commodity. The maps and colored bottles are very fantasy-style, but the random clutter of all the objects together creates a very realistic atmosphere.
In my opinion, there are a few things that could be better. The ceiling / sky should have fewer white stars - this could make it more dramatic / more depth. Also, your character is lovely, but she is a bit difficult to see - maybe brighter colors and sharper lines would help; that way there would be a central focus in this deviation.
In the description you made a remark about the train being too small - I agree it should be larger, but I also think that it doesn't really affect the piece in a negative way. If you had not mentioned this in the description, I wouldn't have noticed right away, so don't worry!

I would like to mention that this is my first critique. I read many other critiques and read the official rules, but I'm not sure if I did it right... So I understand if you choose not to display it, I would not be offended at all. :heart: ~nfaas
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LogicinWonderland Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2015
This is beautiful!
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:iconpolobreak:
PoLoBreak Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2014
This should be turned into an anime
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:iconqzpgot:
qzpgot Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2014
Gorgeous!!
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:iconfruittartz:
FruitTartz Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Woahhh I love the concept of this *A* I applaud you on your patience with all the detail in this artwork @_@
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:iconwhyayemann777:
WhyAyeMann777 Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2013
My dream room :) Fully Equipped with steam locomotive and star gazing equipment
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:iconpaxaeternum:
PaxAeternum Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2013  Professional General Artist
EXCELLENT work on that steam locomotive.  Looks like an LMS Crab Mogul..... I love the overall dreamlike quality of it too.
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:iconrailroadnutjob:
RailroadNutjob Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2013  Student General Artist
Wow.
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:iconmirikue:
mirikue Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I LOVE the whole "time seller" concept!!!!
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:iconbluebellbb:
BlueBellBB Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2013  Student General Artist
Wow, I love this room! How creative!

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:iconkevlartounge:
Kevlartounge Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
This is lovely! So beautiful, mysterious and inspiring *-* <3
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:iconwhippetwild:
WhippetWild Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
the locomotive looks perfect to me :)
I like the shorter or smaller engines (works on a 2ft gauge railway and has soft spots for a 15 inch guage in the north, and a 12 inch guage in the south)
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:iconsuzukikun:
suzukikun Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2012
wow awesome
nice OC..:)
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:iconpan-tor:
Pan-tor Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2012  Student
,WOW...มัน..อลังกาล
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:iconthemirne:
TheMirne Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2012
Wow! Beautiful! *.*
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:iconsetsuna1111:
setsuna1111 Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2012   Digital Artist
So beautiful,Love the spark starry sky on ceiling and so much love how the train landed through the room, amazings.keep up work ^^
สวยมากเลยจ้า ^^
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:iconmakoyana:
Makoyana Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Awesome work! So many details. Moreover, it's traditional, I've never been good at working with traditional stuff like watercolours, that is why I'm more than just amazed by how wonderfully it is done :love: Also, I loved the idea of the picture and character :la:
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tobiaswphoto Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Gorgeous! The thoughts behind it too. What a fantastic creative process. I really love the details here. A joy to look at.
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Nagato-chi Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2012
I really enjoy your work! There are so many details! ^_^
And I loved your character :3~
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:iconcherry-freckle:
cherry-freckle Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2012
That is amazing...
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:iconai-indigo:
ai-indigo Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2012
วานิลาเท่มากกก เราขอซื้อเวลาว่างด้วยคนนะคะ ฮาฮา ; v ;

ภาพสวยมากๆๆค่ะ แฟนตาซีมากด้วยย >///<

ทั้งฉาก รถไฟ แผนที่ นาฬิกา ท้องฟ้า(?) รายละเอียด ลายเส้น สีสัน ชอบหมดค่าา <3
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Ab-anna Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
... อลังการและมีความหมายในตัวงานอีกแล้วค่ะ ชอบที่สุดเลย <3
เปอร์สเป็คทีฟสวยมากๆเลยค่ะ <3
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:iconferchank:
ferchank Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2012  Student Digital Artist
บ้าพลังมากกกก //โดนตบ
สวยหงาก ชอบรถไฟ ฉึกฉักๆๆ
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:iconits-ash-yo:
its-ash-yo Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2012
god damn this is gorgeous!!!!
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:iconhoshicho:
hoshicho Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2012   Traditional Artist
Amazing work, I love all the details :love: Your coloring and style is so beautiful :aww:
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:iconwarin14:
WARIN14 Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
โชว์เมพอีกแล้วว
ยัดเข้าไปได้ไงอะกระดาษเล็กกระจิ๊ดเท่าั้นนนนนน;3;b!!!!!
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:iconaggielexi:
aggielexi Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow, really nice detail and perspective.
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Nado-chan Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2012
You are really really awesome! I have never faved so much from an artist before. It is really rare that I fave a lot of things from only one artist. xD
I always love the details you make and your coloration is godlike!!! >u< Never give up drawing!~~ ww
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92KICKSTART Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2012  Student General Artist
amazing XD
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:iconpikaguardian:
Pikaguardian Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2012
kewl concept. sounds like you would enjoy the movie: In Time, where time is currency :)
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:iconhallodavid:
hallodavid Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
a beautiful picture, really!
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:iconmr-chan:
MR-chan Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Amazing:la:
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:iconpsychsg:
psychsg Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2012
now thats cool.
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:iconvya:
vya Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2012
Oh my god!!! :heart: Wow! that's great! :love:
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:iconmeleto:
meleto Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2012  Student Digital Artist
ละเอียดมากเลยอ่ะพี่หมอก..

ชอบอ่า มันดูแฟนตาสี ฝีนๆ ดี ><~
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JDestinyX Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2012
Wauuuwwwhhh !
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:iconmoon-mascot:
Moon-Mascot Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
So many details!:wow: It's very beautiful!:heart:
How much time did it take?
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:iconmiimork:
miimork Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
About 15 hours XD
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:iconmoon-mascot:
Moon-Mascot Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow xD Amazing!:D
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:iconjennwutchayuh:
jennwutchayuh Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2012  Student Digital Artist
That's amazing e-e
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umbrella-bear Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
เทคนิกนี้เจ๋งมากก ชอบมากก แอร๊ยย
ชอบภาพนี้มากค่ะ ดีเทลดูแน่นดี
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Pixx-73 Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Very nice work. :)
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:iconaxizien:
axizien Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2012  Student
สวย มว๊ากกกก!! @0@
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:iconpipe-stream:
Pipe-stream Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow!! So many details!!
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:iconloxsiana:
loxsiana Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2012  Student Digital Artist
หมีย์แม่มมม สวยมากภาพนี้ ชอบมาก ชอบดีเทลเธอว๊าคๆๆ มันมีเรื่องราว อั๊ยยยย
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miimork Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
นาน ๆ หมีจะเยอะที หมีอยากได้กระดาษหย่ายย หย่ายยยยย อัลปาก้าซื้อให้หน่อย /ผิด
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bomgirl Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
This is sooooo amazing. I love it!
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GnAc Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2012
Awesome! In particular, I like how you work with the perspective and all those details :D
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:iconmiimork:
miimork Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Thank you XDDDD
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:icongnac:
GnAc Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2012
You're welcome :>
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