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Also, I loved the idea of the picture and character 
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It is always wonderful to find a deviation in which the concept and the actual piece are equally impressive; I love the idea of someone in their "working space" selling time as a commodity. The maps and colored bottles are very fantasy-style, but the random clutter of all the objects together creates a very realistic atmosphere.
In my opinion, there are a few things that could be better. The ceiling / sky should have fewer white stars - this could make it more dramatic / more depth. Also, your character is lovely, but she is a bit difficult to see - maybe brighter colors and sharper lines would help; that way there would be a central focus in this deviation.
In the description you made a remark about the train being too small - I agree it should be larger, but I also think that it doesn't really affect the piece in a negative way. If you had not mentioned this in the description, I wouldn't have noticed right away, so don't worry!
I would like to mention that this is my first critique. I read many other critiques and read the official rules, but I'm not sure if I did it right... So I understand if you choose not to display it, I would not be offended at all.
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