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One more hydrangeas XD drew with ballpoint pen again
This time is my classwork at university

The first one
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Let me start off with the detail. I absolutely love the hydrangea design on the kimono. It's very well done, and it's clear that much time was put into every leaf and flower. The same can be said about her hair. Each individual strand is visible, and coupled with the detail put into the flow of her hair, it's wonderful. The loose strands also give it a very realistic touch.
Next, the anatomy, which is excellent. The only thing that negates it is the proportions of her facial features. I think it's the distance from the eye to the nose, or perhaps the jaw, that makes her face seem just a tad too small in comparison to the rest of her. Other than that, she herself is wonderful. The pose is very natural, and I really just can't get over her hand. Her hand is absolutely beautiful, one of my favorite things about this picture , actually.
Moving on to the shading... it is minimal, but that's part of this picture's charm. There's just enough in her clothing to show the creases, but not too much that is distracts from the intricate details in the kimono's pattern. The lack of shading in the face but pronounced shading against the shōji give the woman an almost ethereal feel, which really works in favor to the impact and overall feel of the picture. The layout of this picture, whether consciously planned or otherwise, is wondrous, as well.
The contrast of white and black is what I believe really gives this picture its impact. It has the eye moving from her face to the hydrangea design, that then leads down into the stark white on the bottom left side of the picture and on up into the top left corner. I believe this also helps to emphasize the emotion present. When the viewer look upon her face and see the vacuity of her eyes, there is a feeling of emptiness, or even loneliness. The transition from detail and color to the void of whiteness makes it seem as if the woman in the picture is fading away, but the flowers floating among the white give the impression that her fading away isn't a bad thing, possibly even representing a release from whatever has left her so vacant.

Overall, I'm completely enraptured. This picture is absolutely exquisite. It's easy to tell that much time and effort was put into creating this.
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~ferchank Aug 5, 2012  Student Digital Artist
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~leinef Jul 12, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
wow I really love works like this! It looks simple but has so much emotion and meaning inside of it! And omg those lines and pattern!! Gorgeous work!!
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~RiverGlow Jul 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
wow! like , amazing!!!!
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~aggielexi Jun 30, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Very nice detail!
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~92KICKSTART Jun 30, 2012  Student General Artist
ur shading is so great !
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Lovely, as always.
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~DawntoSunset Jun 30, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
And its just as good as the first one. Good job :D
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~jacobsechter Jun 30, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Stunning.
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Mood: Love ~KeiriiSakuraKashii Jun 30, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Wow! I really love this one!!!
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