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Dream Diary 4th Night by miimork Dream Diary 4th Night by miimork
I had a dream…
that I was a poem writer
and you were an editor.
Every week I wrote 10 love poems for your magazine with out any difficulty.
There was no first draft nor final draft in my working process,
but surprisingly all of the poems I wrote had an excellent reputation.

Then I decided to write a love poem for you.
A month had passed, and I still have no clue of what I should do.



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P.S. Please feel free to correct any of my English errors. Thank you!
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MichelleBergeron Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This is so very beautiful and sincere! In a many of ways, may I be able to relate towards this story in itself in a metaphorical sense. :aww: Beautiful story telling. :nod:
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WhIppIng-b0y Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2013
Man, that's great!
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kotonamii Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2013  Student General Artist
I love your dream diary concepts!
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Black-Quose Featured By Owner May 31, 2013  Student Digital Artist
just...wow...
don't have a single word to say
so... fantastic... >[]<
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YumiKitsune Featured By Owner May 31, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
This is adorable =)

I did notice a couple things to correct..
In this sentence: "There were no first draft nor final draft in my working process"
I would say "There WAS no first draft OR final draft"

and in this one: "but surprisingly all of the poems I wrote had a excellent reputation."
I would say "had AN excellent reputation"

Again, if you have any questions feel free to ask :D

Are these based on your dreams? Do you keep a dream journal?
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miimork Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
I'd wondered whether I shoud use 'was' or 'were' there, it seems that I picked the wrong choice lol. Thank you very much<3<3
And I forgot about 'a' and 'an' again *blush* Thank you for your correction T////T

About the question - nope, this is all fiction XD , and I always hardly remember my dream so I can't manage to kept a dream journal (I've tried once though, and it lasted only for a month orz).
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YumiKitsune Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
You're welcome =)

I tried to keep a dream diary once..I never woke up in time to write anything down and forgot it as soon as I woke up. Now I just don't have interesting dreams anymore XD
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OctoberSmile Featured By Owner May 31, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I really like this because I love dreams <3
I always try to draw them but they never have that "feel"
great work btw.
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inkowai Featured By Owner May 31, 2013
These are seriously too cute :iconholdfeelsplz:
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Lergahin Featured By Owner May 31, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
That's lovely ^^
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