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Dream Diary 2nd Night by miimork Dream Diary 2nd Night by miimork
I had a dream...
of a town somewhere on this planet,
where every roof was black and all walls were white.
'The monochrome town,' I named it
as I walked along a riverside.

But then you appeared out of the blue,
and suddenly, surrounding scenery seemed to change.
carnation pink, golden yellow and crimson hue:
overflowing, millions of colors were so fascinating and strange.

And there you were from nowhere,
standing beside me, right there.

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P.S. Please feel free to correct my English errors Thank you very much!
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derJOgelle Featured By Owner May 30, 2014   General Artist
That perfect moment when the description becomes part of the piece!=)
Beautiful & inspiring beyond what words could describe!

Touching, heart-warming, changing the world for the better.
It's fellow artists like you and sweet little pieces like this here that make me wanna hug the entire world!

It's these seemingly "small", 1-in-a-million drawings that surprise me everytime!

This piece alone gives me so much power, will, fascination, appreciation for the world & love that I can go on, fighting against antisocial behaviour, violence, racist politics,... to protect  THIS - The beauty of this, our world!


From the bottom of my heart, THANK YOU!:heart::iconsupertighthugplz:Huggle! Hug :happybounce: Love SO FLUFFY Lovely Shoujo (Heart for you) [V3] Yin and yang heart~ Pikachu Wave Totoro Icon/Avatar Free To Use! Roses Mapache | Raccoon 00 Smile :iconjoeywheelerthumbsupplz: :iconyugimutoawwplz: Great Job 
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P.S.: Is it ok if I share this on my tumblr & twitter?
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miimork Featured By Owner May 30, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
Thank you very much for your comment! *blush*
Yes, please feel free to share this on your tumblr & twitter! It is my pleasure!
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Rallya Featured By Owner May 30, 2013  Student General Artist
Oh wow. This is amazing. :D
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joedartjr Featured By Owner May 28, 2013
You're a magician of the craft. The story compliments the feeling of the art perfectly; masterfully done.
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Jenniej92 Featured By Owner May 26, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
this is so pretty <3
i love your work!
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Escente Featured By Owner May 25, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
If you don't mind, there are a couple of slight errors: "surrounded" should be "surrounding", and "fascinated" should be "fascinating"...
But otherwise it's a beautiful poem and a beautiful picture! I'm enjoying your Dream Diary series very much. :D
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miimork Featured By Owner May 25, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Thank you very much!!
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YumiKitsune Featured By Owner May 25, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Are you sure you want English corrections? Because I don't wanna sound rude when I think what you've written is very lovely, if rough. =)
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miimork Featured By Owner May 25, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Yes I'm sure XD All of the corrections are very helpful to me because I will be able to notice where I wrote it wrong so that I can improve it in my next writing.
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YumiKitsune Featured By Owner May 25, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Well I noticed with this line
"where every roof was black and every wall were white."
You could either say "every wall was white" or something like "all walls were white"

With this line
"'The monochrome town,' I named it on my first met"
I understand the idea I think and I'm not sure how to reword it to rhyme with planet but..grammatically it doesn't really make sense. I suppose you could just make it
"'The monochrome town,' I named it" Depending on where you're from "planet" and "it" very nearly rhyme.

With this line
"overflowing millions colors were so fascinating and strange."
I would probably change it to "overflowing, millions of colors were so fascinating and strange."

And with this line
"standing beside me right there."
I would either put a comma between me and right or perhaps just remove the word right

I hope this was helpful and not too annoying :iconnervouslaughplz: If you have any questions or anything feel free to ask me.
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