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Dream Diary 10th Night by miimork Dream Diary 10th Night by miimork
I had a dream…
of a star shower night,
and I was by his side.
You said that my wish will come true if I beg to the shooting star?
Ridiculous! How could they hear me, they were that far!
It should be easier if I say my wish to you instead,
"Let's me be by your side! That by itself great!"



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P.S. Please feel free to correct any of my English errors. Thank you!
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ColorfulGuitar Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
oh beautiful! beautiful!!
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Clutzy101 Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
WOW that's beautiful! I love the picture, I love the words!
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Aria-Art Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow! I really love this piece, the textures and colours are stunning. May I inquire to what mediums and techniques you used?
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miimork Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
In this piece I used watercolor and salt technique XD
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Aria-Art Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
It's a really nice use of the technique!  I read some of the the comments, did you intentionally make the girl figure? 
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miimork Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
No, originally there is no girl figure in the picture XD I noticed after reading the comment too *laugh*
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Sa7ar555 Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Beautiful ^-^ thumbs up emote
reminds me of someone I miss..i miss you glomping me
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dou-to Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This image with those words is enough to make someone melt. You can almost see a girl in the paint sitting beside him!

Um.. if any corrections then maybe...

"Would your wish would come true if you begged a shooting star?" You asked.
"Ridiculous!" I cried, "How could they hear me if they are that far!"
"It should be easier if you were to ask me for your wish instead..."
"Let me be by your side! That in itself would be great!"

Or
"Would your wish come true if you begged a shooting star?" You asked.

Ridiculous! How could they hear me if they are that far! Asking you would be easier for this anyways...

"Let me stay by your side! That by itself would be great!"

Fjsjfnsjf nvm this is a beautiful piece!


Or idk ahhah//
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TearsOfWolf Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
The stories behind the pictures are wonderful. And the pictures, too. :)
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YumiKitsune Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
The only thing that I think really needs changing is this line:
"That's all is enough great!"

I'm thinking you mean something like "That in itself would be enough" But I'm not sure. Maybe "That's all I want"?

Either way I'm finding less things to nitpick about in your english and the picture as usual is gorgeous! =)
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Calluna-Draconis Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Ah, salt makes things magical :D
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MaiMint Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2013
Still loving this series. :heart:
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SayuriIto Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
wonderful
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aggielexi Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This is really beautiful, and I think I would change the English, just a smidge. id my


"You said that my wish will come true if I beg to the shooting star?" = "You asked "Will my wish come true if I beg to the shooting star?"
"Ridiculous! How could they hear me, they were that far!" = "Ridiculous! How could they hear me if they were that far?"
"That's all is enough great!" = "That by itself is great!"

As I said before, I really love this piece, and your English has improved greatly!
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miimork Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Thank you very much for your comment and corrections!!! This is very helpful for me <3<3<3
P.S. Also I'm really appreciate that you love this piece <3 a big thanks again!
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flowerpower138 Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
okay tell me i'm crazy, i sorta see a figure of a girl behind him...i'm insane aren't i XD
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miimork Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
I begin to see a girl in the background after reading your comment too XD
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flowerpower138 Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
yea~ my comment is AMAZING~!! XD
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Rorrimami Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2013   Writer
No! I sort of see it too! O:
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flowerpower138 Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
yea! i'm not crazy!! XD
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Rorrimami Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2013   Writer
Hahaha nope
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