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June 19, 2013
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Dream Diary 10th Night by miimork Dream Diary 10th Night by miimork
I had a dream…
of a star shower night,
and I was by his side.
You said that my wish will come true if I beg to the shooting star?
Ridiculous! How could they hear me, they were that far!
It should be easier if I say my wish to you instead,
"Let's me be by your side! That by itself great!"

P.S. Please feel free to correct any of my English errors. Thank you!
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ColorfulGuitar Dec 8, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
oh beautiful! beautiful!!
Clutzy101 Nov 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
WOW that's beautiful! I love the picture, I love the words!
Aria-Art Oct 29, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow! I really love this piece, the textures and colours are stunning. May I inquire to what mediums and techniques you used?
miimork Oct 30, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
In this piece I used watercolor and salt technique XD
Aria-Art Oct 31, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
It's a really nice use of the technique!  I read some of the the comments, did you intentionally make the girl figure? 
miimork Nov 1, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
No, originally there is no girl figure in the picture XD I noticed after reading the comment too *laugh*
Beautiful ^-^ thumbs up emote
reminds me of someone I miss..i miss you glomping me
dou-to Jul 28, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This image with those words is enough to make someone melt. You can almost see a girl in the paint sitting beside him!

Um.. if any corrections then maybe...

"Would your wish would come true if you begged a shooting star?" You asked.
"Ridiculous!" I cried, "How could they hear me if they are that far!"
"It should be easier if you were to ask me for your wish instead..."
"Let me be by your side! That in itself would be great!"

"Would your wish come true if you begged a shooting star?" You asked.

Ridiculous! How could they hear me if they are that far! Asking you would be easier for this anyways...

"Let me stay by your side! That by itself would be great!"

Fjsjfnsjf nvm this is a beautiful piece!

Or idk ahhah//
TearsOfWolf Jul 4, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
The stories behind the pictures are wonderful. And the pictures, too. :)
YumiKitsune Jun 23, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
The only thing that I think really needs changing is this line:
"That's all is enough great!"

I'm thinking you mean something like "That in itself would be enough" But I'm not sure. Maybe "That's all I want"?

Either way I'm finding less things to nitpick about in your english and the picture as usual is gorgeous! =)
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